发信人: blue_icy(韩霄)
整理人: roy_young(2002-09-05 09:45:13), 站内信件
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some mistakes:
1、Forth, some enterprises positively reject the no college graduate applications, even though they apply for a simply work.
I think they should be:
Forth, some enterprises positively reject the non-college graduates' applications, even though they apply for a simple work.
2、The increasing number of unemployment result in many society problems. The criminal come first, the report form the government tells us
I think they should be:
The increasing number of unemployed results in many social problems. The crime comes first, the report from the government tells us
3、The serious of unemployment problem we facing is mentioned above, the solution of it should be taken widely. The first steep should be changing the attitude of job seeker and setting up more training organizations,
I think they should be:
The seriousness of unemployment problem we are facing is mentioned above, the solution of it should be taken widely. The first step should be changing the attitude of job seekers and setting up more training organizations,
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I wish none of this had happened...
So do all who live to see such times,
but that is not for them to decide.
All we have to decide is——
what to do with the time that is given to us.
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